After we left Steve's lecture the other day simon gave our scipts back which we did on the monday before.
Simon gave some feedback to me and Sam about our script which was about our morning journey to uni.
Positive comments: An ok first attempt, nice interplay and the title page was formatted well
EBI: we could of improved on using less dialog and more progression with the story.
I agree with the feedback we had. I initially thought the comments would be too good as this was the first time i wrote a script but i was happy, i agree we could of used less dialog as we kept on one scene for a long time and used less action
I can now use the feedback to help with my 10 page script.
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